Saturday, January 29, 2005

Second Collaboration

Welcome to my blog. I will publish some poetry on it every week, normally on a friday. The poem is in italics.

If you want to contribute to the poem in any way then please do so.If you want to you can:

Give the poem a title or name.

Add to it.

Suggest deletions.

Re-write some or all of it.

Provide a link to somewhere else on the internet.

Make a comment.

Write a version of the poem or part of the poem in a language other than English.

Any of the above in a language other than English.



Toe Nail

(close up of toe-nail)

organic marine matter

receding into the distance

pier end

(coming up all too fast)

pale sunlight

water fronting

pier ending

sun shining nigh

unto the end

pier pressure

everyone out – knocking down

these doors – drowning

2 Comments:

Anonymous Anonymous said...

Toe Nail

(close up)

organic

receding

(coming up

all too fast)

sunlight

fronting

pier ending

shining (nigh!)

unto the end

pier pressure

everyone out –

knocking down

doors – drowning

cleaning half-

sun (close-

up) organic

shield

walking -

January 29, 2005 at 5:14 AM  
Anonymous david kennedy said...

yummy but can we have some pictures of shoes please?

March 26, 2005 at 2:33 AM  

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